Tuesday, April 23, 2013

Alyssa's Haikus

Running down to Moonstone
Surfing with Kateri now
Catch you in an hour


Front facing camera
Did the picture take? Wait what?
                                                              Ew. Delete that now.


What would it be like
to fly like those hummingbirds
hover, flit, flap, fly

7 comments:

  1. I love it! I like the way you spaced the second poem

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  2. Great job! Just make sure that you are counting the syllables correctly. P.S. I love the second one! Haha. Totally true.

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  3. I like the alliteration and modern life one

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  4. And the last one. The first one is 6 sylallbles the second 7 syllalbles and third is 6.

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